This is our first working version of our film opening, The Delivery Boy.

Things I liked:

• The calm and mysterious tone of the narration.
• The black and white scene at the end, which correlates with the narration "people see in black and white".
• The 180 degrees turn when Daniel's character is putting on his tie in the mirror.

Things I feel we need to improve or change:

• Some of narration doesn't make sense, and I feel is pointless.
• There is a short period of time during the car journey where nothing happens, and I feel should be cut.
• There are some rough transitions that need to be edited.
• We need to add a film company logo somewhere during the film.

I will make another post next week with the feedback we got as a group from our class.